The Car Crash

I woke up then !Bang! my 🚗 was on 🔥 my 👨 was in the shop I shouted !Help!. My 👨 ran and got me out of the 🚗 then called the 🚒 to come and wash away the 🔥. After tat we got dropped of 🏠 by the police. It was the most scary crash I have ever had.

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  1. Philiprip28 April 2020 at 19:40

    Cool emoji story. The message is very clear and easy to understand.

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  2. Anonymous11 May 2020 at 16:56

    I really love the emojis that you put in and l agree with Mr. Waller

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  3. Anonymous13 May 2020 at 17:27

    Nice choice of emojis and good punctuation

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  4. Anonymous14 May 2020 at 17:03

    Wow, I really like your emoji story (:

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  5. Anonymous11 March 2021 at 15:31

    I like your emoji nice one

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  6. Anonymous11 March 2021 at 15:35

    you got in a car crash what happened in of house but i really liked your story

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