Teddy

 Teddy


I woke up in bed to see my brother standing in front of me. “ Happy birthday Jimmy” I looked up, he was holding a brown teddy bear and a balloon that said get well soon. I never saw my brother with a smile on his face. He gave me the teddy and balloon.


An hour later


My brother left and I laid down watching the teddy like it was alive. Suddenly the teddy moved, it smiled, it started to move towards me. I kicked it off the bed hoping it couldn’t climb. “  Jimmy are you okay”

I woke up seeing my brother sitting next to me. I still had the teddy so I quickly looked to see if it was alive but luckily it wasn't. That was the most frightening dream I had ever had.

Comments

  1. Philiprip10 March 2021 at 23:56

    Nice work. This is an excellent complex sentence... "Suddenly the teddy moved, it smiled, it started to move towards me." I'm wondering why Jimmy is sick?

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  2. Anonymous11 March 2021 at 15:30

    poor jimmy i hope he will get well

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  3. Anonymous11 March 2021 at 15:31

    what happened to jimmy why is he in the hospital i like how the teddy is nice and why did he never see his brother ever smile?

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  4. Anonymous11 March 2021 at 15:32

    i love it Angela, its really interesting and lovely speech bubbles

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  5. Anonymous11 March 2021 at 15:34

    KInda reminds when I was little.
    Great work!

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  6. Anonymous11 March 2021 at 15:35

    This was a interesting story to read and i'm not to sure if i'm going to sleep with any stuffed animals anymore after reading this... I also liked the way you started the story with putting "I woke up to see my brother standing in front of me.

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