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Narrative Planning Sheet angela t

  It was a rainy day and I was in the lounge watching tv. I was watching carefully at my brother staring at my pet turtle in his bowl. I glared back at my movie in surprise. It was almost finished.  A while later I went to get a drink in the kitchen, when I got back I froze. My eyes were on my turtle’s bowl. It was empty and my turtle was gone. I looked down to see my little brother playing next to my turtle’s bowl. I let out the anger I had in me and I started shouting at my brother. But it wasn’t for long because my mum walked in and stopped me. My mum talked to me about my turtle and how I should have taken care of it more carefully, in my head I was thinking about how scared the turtle would be. The sun was up and I was eating sausages for breakfast. But I had to go to the toilet. I came back from the toilet and on the table where my empty plate was. I quickly noticed that my little brother next to my seat was chewing on food. I didn’t hesitate, I stomped towards him in an...

Turangawaewae

       Turangawaewae I glanced down feeling the cold breeze flow past me. The view in front of me was magnificent.  I watched the waves wash the sand in . The smell of the sizzling sausages was the best. The hearing of kids playing in the sand felt calming.   I layed down feeling the heat of the sun on me . I knew this was the place. I placed myself on the soft sand for a while then I stood up to see that the sizzling sausages were almost ready. The flavor of the sausages was delicious .  I feast both eyes on the horizon.  Mission bay was where I stood, where I felt welcomed home.  I said my last goodbyes before I left.  So long Mission bay I say watching it become much smaller as we drive away.

100 word challenge

  Bella and her friends were having a sleepover. They decided to play hide and seek. Bella was the seeker, she counted to 50 sec. After a 50 sec count Bella went to look for her friends. She looked everywhere but still nobody found. After 10m she found four of them, now she only needed one more. She knew there was only one room she didn’t check yet. So quietly she went down to the basement.  Suddenly, darkness enveloped the room. Bella was scared but then it was bright again. After that, she found the last hider. After, they all went to sleep.

Who's the hero in your family

My mum is the most hard-working person in my family. She is always clean and whenever there is a mess she cleans it up. She does all our washing and she keeps our house clean at all times. If we are going somewhere she packs what we need before we go.  The helpful person in my life is my mum. She is always helpful because she helps me if I am stuck on something. She also does my lunch if I forgot to do it. If I am in a rush to go to school she cleans my bed for me. She helps me if I get sick or hurt. She would help get me ready for school and she would remind me if I have forgotten something. My mum also helps me with my homework. If it's hard she would explain it to me so I can understand and so I can finish it.   My kind mother is always playing with me and she always takes me to places so I don’t get bored at home. She always cheers me up when I am sad and she gives money to the poor. If I have a project she always buys the things I need for it. She cooks foo...

Dear Carla

This is about a boy named Bradley writing a letter to his councilor that left his school.     Dear  carla, It’s a pleasure to write to you, I am so sorry I didn’t come to your office thank you for the letter. I finally got a gold star beside my name, thank you for handing in my book report. I went to Coleen's birthday party and gave her the present that you said to give from the heart but I should have not written love Bradley because they laughed. But I also laughed too even though it was still embarrassing. But then Karen the girl that was good at the sumasotes stopped it by shouting.  Coleen’s birthday party was fun. At first, I was worried I had to have a ribbon on my present but I didn’t and I also thought we needed to wear ripped pants so I cut holes in my pants, I was so worried I had to get changed six times. When we got there we heard a loud scream. I sat at the table and Coleen's mum said I must be very hungry.   We had to play games before we at...

Leafy sea dragon

Teddy

  Teddy I woke up in bed to see my brother standing in front of me. “ Happy birthday Jimmy” I looked up, he was holding a brown teddy bear and a balloon that said get well soon. I never saw my brother with a smile on his face. He gave me the teddy and balloon. An hour later My brother left and I laid down watching the teddy like it was alive. Suddenly the teddy moved, it smiled, it started to move towards me. I kicked it off the bed hoping it couldn’t climb. “  Jimmy are you okay” I woke up seeing my brother sitting next to me. I still had the teddy so I quickly looked to see if it was alive but luckily it wasn't. That was the most frightening dream I had ever had.